Very nice piece. I love when poems tell a story and this sort of reminded me of a poe tale... not as dark, but still the morbid hints at it. Very nice format... good flow. Bravo once more Sorrow.

Rhymings not so great as usual but it's a touching song. The chorus is the best part definetly. QueenVixta x

I liked the ending it almost gives like an eearie sense to the song, nice song.

I like this song. It has a sort of twist to it in the end.