I'm sorry, but I personally didn't care for this piece. Perhaps it was just its cheery expressions, but all I know is that there was just something I didn't like about it. I do think, though, that this may be a transition piece into something better; a few of the lines flow very nicely. I wonder if you could find some more inspiration over the upcoming holidays to add to it.

This was beautiful. Some plot 'bunny' as you called it. I loved it! 11/10 all round!