A very lovely and sweet poem. I hope you and your girlfriend are now closer!

Hi I got to say this is good also the same thing i said before you have talent in don't let anbody tell you different in keep up the good work

i real feel the connection shared between the two people.Great job i really admire your work and the effort it takes in creating each piece.i do not understand why 'ardscoil class' feels the need to constantly make a mockery of your works.'ardscoil class' grow up!

Keith,Great poem. Loffs it!

Loffs you...Unstable

Uh oh...did I see the word "babe" in a poem? Sorry, that's not fair, I know it's a quote. Right. Again, I'm being faced with the uncomfortable position of reviewing romance...I DO like the "gilded moment" line. Hurrah for imagery!

aw... man i'm gonna start crying... i'm in a long distance relationship at the moment- very long distance, he's in USA, i'm in Sweden. It's so freakin hard. But this is an awesome poem, really sweet.

Keith, we never knew!

thats beautiful. so quiet and slow, almost dreamlike. this is goin on my faves.

Han.

Aww, how sweet/sad! Great flow and everything.

pretty... i like it... when you get a minute please check out some of my poems, thanks! write on -Em

Beautiful. I remember feeling that way, being able to feel the person right there next to you. Unfortunatly I had forgotten.Thank you for reminding me...

i can't believe i haven't reviewed this!! *blush* i'm sorry.. this poem reminds me so much of you two, it's so sweet and so full of emotion. great work, as always.. lo¨ve ~zai~ps: oh.. and thanks for putting me in your bio, i guess you're welcome.. :P and thanks for being there aswell.

Hello again:). It was lovely, as usual. I could almost relate. It must be very lonely.

A great romantic poem, though it makes you feel kind of sad after reading it. Distant relationships are tough, bet true love can survive anything.

This is great poetry! Impressive work here. Especially the ending. I love it.

~Kalopsia