Great start. Very intriguing. I'll be watching for more.

well now, i have to say this is intriguing. so you'd better get the first chapter up soon lest you wish to taste my evil wrath... yea...

I thought it was awesome but a little too Strait up front sort of story. But other than that it makes me what to read more so hurry up and do the rest of the chapter 1

Hmm, nifty. I'd like to see this go further Am's. Y'know, the blood red moon every 100 years, kinda sounds i dunno, a little famliar...mh... meh, Sounds good CONTINUE (don't forget to read mine! )

hey! that was great sounds really really interesting. it's a good storyline already. i love it! i love how you described the coming of the dark phoenix it was sweet.