| Reviews for A Winter Landscape |
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gatsby.z 8/16/05 . chapter 1this is nice, though i didnt get the point of view. is it decorations or ornamesnts or something? it's good though! have fun! |
Winged Shadow 4/9/05 . chapter 1Aw, so cool. |
pneumothorax 12/29/04 . chapter 1A bit of a confused rhythmn but I liked the idea. Interesting take. I liked the story-like quality. |
Grace Hsia 12/25/04 . chapter 1Jules, this is a very interesting poem! And describes many funny points in it (Mr. Smith falling and throwing a shoe at carolers, and then the dog fertilizing the tree...lol!) Anyhows, keep updating your story! And I just finished typing up an email to you oh, and MERRY CHRISTMAS! (And a happy new Year!) grace |
DaybreakStorms08 12/24/04 . chapter 1Awesome! I love the last few lines; almost like people do more "living" on Christmas than at other times of the year. Hard to get what point of view this is; at first I thought it was a snowman, but they're ornaments, aren't they? Great job. And Merry Christmas! |
Serenity Marie 12/23/04 . chapter 1-claps- good job! its great! |