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| Storm of Fire 2005-08-16 ch 1, | abusethis is nice, though i didnt get the point of view. is it decorations or ornamesnts or something? it's good though! have fun! |
| Winged Shadow 2005-04-09 ch 1, | abuseAw, so cool. |
| pneumothorax 2004-12-29 ch 1, | abuseA bit of a confused rhythmn but I liked the idea. Interesting take. I liked the story-like quality. |
| Orient Fox 2004-12-25 ch 1, | abuseJules, this is a very interesting poem! And describes many funny points in it (Mr. Smith falling and throwing a shoe at carolers, and then the dog fertilizing the tree...lol!) Anyhows, keep updating your story! And I just finished typing up an email to you oh, and MERRY CHRISTMAS! (And a happy new Year!) grace |
| Band Geek17 2004-12-24 ch 1, | abuseAwesome! I love the last few lines; almost like people do more "living" on Christmas than at other times of the year. Hard to get what point of view this is; at first I thought it was a snowman, but they're ornaments, aren't they? Great job. And Merry Christmas! |
| Wabibito 2004-12-23 ch 1, | abuse-claps- good job! its great! |