this is nice, though i didnt get the point of view. is it decorations or ornamesnts or something? it's good though! have fun!

Aw, so cool.

A bit of a confused rhythmn but I liked the idea. Interesting take. I liked the story-like quality.

Jules, this is a very interesting poem! And describes many funny points in it (Mr. Smith falling and throwing a shoe at carolers, and then the dog fertilizing the tree...lol!) Anyhows, keep updating your story! And I just finished typing up an email to you

oh, and MERRY CHRISTMAS! (And a happy new Year!)

grace

Awesome! I love the last few lines; almost like people do more "living" on Christmas than at other times of the year. Hard to get what point of view this is; at first I thought it was a snowman, but they're ornaments, aren't they? Great job. And Merry Christmas!

-claps- good job! its great!