WOW!!That is so cool!!I am quite speechless!! I've never read anything SO DEEP! Really amazing!! Goes on my fave list!

Hey, this is REALLY good. Its nice to read something positive once in a while. Most people look at it too negatively. I like it a lot! Keep it up!

I liked it. The descriptions were wonderfully written and not repeatative(I see that sometimes in people's writings. They repeat it so much that the description just becomes a jumble of words with almost no meaning anymore). The feelings of happiness were truly evident even though there was a lingering feeling of sorrow. I encourage you to continue writing such great stories.

Well, im glad that you reposted it! It was such a wonderfeul tale of childhood memories and the end of life with a happiness note to it.. that probably didn't make sense... oh well!

Great Job!

*Silent Writer*

Beautiful, Simply beyond words… Your talent is exceptional…

Well Written ~ Odyssey2469