AH!`! Chickens!
I always thought that chickens were evviill, and now I have PROOF!! (aka..I can explain to my parent why I won't eat chicken...)
Couldn't this go in ILC?? you could always just... blend them together.
But anyways, can't wait for more on ILC,
Bloodfeeder

This was funny~poor Edan...those darned evil chickens are out to get him. Damn them! lol

This story was so funny! Poor Edan though. Certainly wasn't very funny for him. Great side-story!

...that was hilarious...it would have been funny to read how he was found...

That was so cute!

I'd be afraid of chickens too if i were him... :P

Very nice! I thought the ending gave a nice touch! Didn't see it comin' lol.

--Kyle's Precious Little Girl

Edan is so adorably ridiculous and hilarity follows him wherever he goes, I suppose. You're the coolest for creating him.

oh my god that was hilariuos! i feel so sorry for poor edan though. i would have thought that same thought after being traumatized by those horid beasts. except... i have a problem with roosters. their evil i tell you! and they take sadistic pleasure in chasing me around my grandmothers house in india. i was so happy i could have thrown a party when my cousin had told me that they killed, beheaded, defeathered, cooked and ate that evil bird.

of course that happened years back when i was like 7/8.

and i'm totally over it... what makes you think i'm still gloating over my little victory? i'm totally serious!! i'm not!!

...

okay, i'm done

*rolling on the floor, laughing my ass off* Oh.. that was Hilarious. I love Edan So much can I have him? er.. nevermind...I dont hing I'd be able to handle him. Can you write more with him in it?

That was so awesome! I can honestly say I would be terrified of chickens, too. Mean of them to serve chicken... Yay! Now I know all the brothers' names! ^_^ So how much older than Edan is Damar, anyway? Hehe, Edan is so crazy... (so why did I end up as him when I took your quiz?!) Ttfn~

~Cat

OMG! This is the FUNNIEST shit I've read in a long time!! Heh heh...I'm giving you a review for this cuz I...haven't quite finished reading Sponta-Spontanei-Oh forget it! I can't spell it, but I LOVE that story! It's brillant and humorous! And I like your site too! The pics on your bio rock too...

*cackles*

l0lz. ahahahah. lmao. rofl. I LOVE IT!IZZO UTTERLY, UTTERLY...EDAN-ISH! BWAHAHAHAHAHA! *falls off chair* i wud add u to mi fav list, but itz currently too full, and i cant be bothered to edit it just yet... i'll get round to it later... >.

Heh, I just read this. Wow, but Edan is an unholy terror. Ah, but he somehow manages to be adorable and lovable anyway. Besides, anyone as insane as him is automatically awsome.

I like how this story kind of gives a backround; we get a look at Edan's life from before everything went to heck in Spontaneity. And... the chickens. I must say, I agree with him on this one. They are evil incarnate.

Either way, I loved this story. It was, as is not too unusual with your stories, amusing as all heck and a fun read.

This was fairly amusing. I like it. ^_^

OH EDAN! *snuggles* hes so funny perfection as awlays!