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| Charity F 2005-10-07 ch 1,  | abuseyou have spelt out the true esnce of what it is to be a writer..(well, for me that is) Love it!! |
| Complications 2005-10-01 ch 1, | abuseeverything you say is true, for me at leased... I really enjoyed that..."The gateway of my knowledge and beliefs" I love that... great poem, I really, it made me think... P.S:if you still have writers block maybe try just discribing pictures or singing, sometimes that helps free ones thoughts. |
| CryNowLaughLater 2005-04-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is brilliant, a fabulous tribute to those of us who consider ourselves writers. very nice. Nice job. Bravo! |
| mepoindexter 2005-04-25 ch 1, | abuseThat says it all. Excellent! |
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, I love this |
| Loki Mischeif-Maker 2005-01-26 ch 1, | abuseWoah - awesome, deep, and very, very well written. Not being much of a poet, I can only say that I loved it; it was an awesome piece of work. Because I must say something "mycrimson" looks like it was supposed to be two words. Other than that, though . . . wow; you are good. PS Thanks for reviewing Courtly Love!Cheers! |
| AllyCred 2005-01-26 ch 1, | abusenice...something all writers and even everyone can relate to...loved it. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
| incandescent.smiles 2005-01-26 ch 1, | abusethis was really good, it describes everything so well! i have an idea kinda close to this one i've been trying to work on weeks. but anyway even if someone is not a writer that writes to release feelings, they can understand the concept at least, from this. wonderful job and thanks for the reveiw! ~leila* |
| Caitlyn Lennon 2005-01-18 ch 1, | abuseVERY GOOD!! I loved it. You have a way with words.Write on,Caitlyn |
| Keeper of the Bells 2005-01-16 ch 1, | abusea little unfinished, it needs a little editing. very promising though. i'd change it a little: My eyes, the gateway to my soul Quick glances find only bold brown Deep looks find my essence My words, the gateway of knowldege, belief Forming them with throat and lips Givng them away, colorful worlds and words Gateways themselves My pen! Sweetest friend, We will tell many stories, thee and i My hands, gateway, key, to another part of me to self-assurance and relief, to smiles and maturity who could i be? only a writer. |
| Keith Andrew 2005-01-16 ch 1, | abuseVery good. It moves along so nicel, so you did the free verse out well. Very nice-Keith Andrew |
| Kalopsia 2005-01-15 ch 1, | abusehaha i like what you wrote about. very nice! |
| Twilit Exaggerance 2005-01-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good! the essence of the poem is well wrote and i really like this. fave straight away! |
| swift sky silver 2005-01-10 ch 1, | abusei'm sure many on this site can relate to this one. you describe the feeling so well. keep up the great work =0) |
| kiran 2005-01-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseamazing once again!! i love the way you describe these simple things like fingers or ears and turn them way more interesting. something i can't do!! lol. anyway great poem. i love the whole message of it and in the end it turning out to be a writer. words are one of the most powerfullest things on this earth. amazing what you can do with it eh? keep writing!! -kiran |