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Jess
2007-02-23
ch 19, anon.
abusePlease please PLEASE update. I'm going through major withdrawls with this story!!
Limegreenqueen
2006-11-09
ch 19,
abusehello sxy princess, i love this story please please please update and a sumary of what has happened would be great because i really dont remeber any ways keep writing you guys are so good at it . i know that homework and school keeps you from writing me also but when you have this much talent you have to use and share it. love your number 1, 2, and 3 fan karla aka limegrenquuen
S.M.G. Lynn
2006-09-29
ch 19,
abuseI do believe it was the second time she slept without nightmares. ;) I love the story so far, been working on reading it for three weeks now. lol. ^^ i can't wait for more. I really love the way you've constructed te story. Its really intense, romantic when needed, planty of "action" and LOADS of mystery, which is a total good thing. ^^ Update soon, yeah?
Snowflake
2006-09-19
ch 19, anon.
abuseWOW!. u guys are really back! Read my hyper review in ripple affect, Same feeling here..only to add that i will have to reread this book as i kinda forgot what was happening...um, perhaps can u post a summary of what has happened till now? hope thats not asking too much...Glad u r back!..never go away again!..Love u both:D
Jenina
2006-09-12
ch 19, anon.
abuseYay! You're back! Brooke and Tanner are together. I love it. It made me smile, and totally made my day. You're a fantastic writer. I love that your chapters are lengthy, even if there is a bit of a long intervals between them. You definitely don't disappoint.

Keep it up! =]
lilitaliandragon
2006-09-12
ch 19,
abusei don't like what you always do with the nurses. why are they typically bitchy girls who're checking out the guys?but YAY you've started it again
Mary Poppins
2006-09-12
ch 19, anon.
abuseWHO! Update! Update! Ya! I love those two. But why do I have the dreadful feeling that this isn't going to last? Please don't let the killer get to her!
Jessica Renee
2006-09-12
ch 19,
abuseSo I was at work when I saw that this was updated and I was off right after so I didn't get a chance to read it, but I was so excited that I speed home to do so. I was not disappointed. Yay! It looks like Brooke and Tanner are getting closer...much closer. Although, Tanner doesn't even seem close to admiting feelings he has for Brooke. Makes sense, though. Well, I'd have more to say now, but I am exhausted after a night of work..just had to say I love it! Update again soon.
leemya
2006-02-23
ch 18,
abuseHi,

I love this story! Please write some more chapters!
Nicolaides
2006-01-28
ch 18,
abuseomgosh this is amazing!! i love how the characters develop and i love the complications. only thing i can think of to comment on is the length of the chapters, i find them a bit tedious, but it could just be me. oh and there were a few spelling mistakes, but other than that i love it!
jay
2005-09-07
ch 18, anon.
abusei can't believe it's been almost FOUR months since this story has been last updated. i miss it like crazy - try and update again soon. :)

i hope you guys just have writers block and nothing too serious is going on in your lives.

no matter when you update, you'll always have a fan in me

jay
DarkenedXtasy
2005-07-17
ch 17,
abuseI absolutly love this story! Please update soon!
mary poppins
2005-06-06
ch 18, anon.
abusetanner do something! quick! i can't believe she kissed him. i thought he would kiss her first. it's a bit odd, but now i want him to make some moves. it's obvious that she wants him and i'm just wondering about him. he seems pretty absorbed by his work. come on tanner. i'm on your side!
lilitaliandragon
2005-05-27
ch 5, anon.
abusehey, bored at my dad's work for a while, so i was rereading and wanted to say how i really like the way you transitioned from brooke and melanie to tanner and bracken with the newspaper articleand also, this story make me want to go practice my instruments and be perfect and everything...only problem is my instruments are currently about 30 miles away, maybe more, maybe less, but in other words, completely inaccessible...
Limegreenqueen
2005-05-26
ch 18,
abusesry srys sry sry! I am soo sorry . i can't believe it took me this long to review. finals are finally finished and school is out. these 2 chapters were great!. absolutely wonderful seeing as how there wasn't that much melanie and bracken. i am so glad that brooke and tanner are acting like a couple. i won't comment on melanie"s actions she is so damn moody. I am glasd hawever that bracken and tanner have made up. i have only one request :please let tanner and brooke kiss again of thier own free will not in a bet this time. it would be soo cut and what is up with the nurse/**. is she an evil ex- girlfriend of tanners or an ex classmate of brookes that was always jelous? anywasy i have a feeling we will hear more from her. keep writing and i hope now that school is over i will have time to update. you should update as soon as posible.or i might have to force you to type.just kidding! love karla
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