The last line really made a huge impact. How somebody who is so overcome by pride could not even shed a single tear for a deceased. I am really moved by this poem. You are simply amazing.

~~Trinity

Aww :( sad poem...the repetition of "Now is it okay to cry?" was very powerful and the ending line really made em think...great poem :) keep writing!

I like your rhymes...yay...it's dark, I like that...crying is hard. because people have thier stupid pride. somebody died right? excuse me if my reviews are boring...Im just a boring person in real life. why dont you write a fantasy story? I will only read that. no way Im going to read the really romance...drama stuff you have there. do u have fantasy? I like you're poems...yay...

no peace,ravendall

very touchy...*sob* sorry didnt mean to do that(not a touching person)hehehehehehehe...

~boy from heaven~ (someone)

Very nice... more adjectives would be good, but it's awsome already. Very nice "sighing winds". Go you!