Very nice! I love how you included Mars/Ares in the poem. Much love.

Such a hint for the future: I notice how on all your poems you put in little author's notes, and it sometimes confuses me by making me think it is part of the poem. So try putting A/N in front of what you are going to say or your username, it helps.

Also, thanks for the review.

I loved it! I thought it was fantastic! You really have some talent. War is a terrible thing and I loved how you brought it all to life! Keep up!