so very sad

well written but very very sad

poor Rikola, that really was very mean

... im going to go cry now, and curse Teeka

all i wanted was a happy ending *cries*

-.- you like doing this to me dont you I get all into the story and you stop writing it XD

I already read this, a while ago, but I just now realised that I didn't review. The ending is so..I don't know...but I love it. It's very sad...even though I would probably do the same thing if I was Teeka...but I also feel bad for gullible Rikola.

I must say this is one of the best stories ive ever read. Great job with the detail and dialogue. Very well written. If you have a chance can you cehck out my story Shade Of Darkness: The Battle

So so sad...makes me want to cry...please UPDATE.

Does that mean it's Treeka he's mainly talking about...That's gonna be sad.

that was...unusual...

um...this was a bit confusing...when the goblin guy refers to helping "them" at the beginning, does he mean the elves?eh oh well i liked this chapter! Update soon!

nice bit of information here, inserted at a pretty 'foreshadowing-ness-ish" moment

COOL! I LOVE YOU!

...well it's very sad and depressing and all that but i do suppose that rikola deserved it and teeka is such a sexy name congratulations love you xoxo meggo

::Crawls into your bed cause I can in my imagination:: I lovez this story! I haven't read the story that this is based off of and I looking for it but I still enjoy this story SO much! I keep thinking of Riccoli(sp?) cough drops though. Yumm.

*torn between hugging teeka and melting into glue because he's so wonderful and special and this - OH MY GOD TEEKA'S SO EVILTHE BASTARDHOW COULD HE?OMG OMGOMG

-_-this is a rant against elvesand need i say IT'S SHORT!Number one: they're overrated. Number two: They're excruciatingly deceptive. Numer three: They're good at making swords and finding surreptitious ways of dispensing those swords to other elves without their masters knowing. Number four: Their hearts are made of stone. ROFLMAO

ooh, a happy state of contentment at homeAnd he knew how to cook broccoli. - love this linehow could he be unaware?tainted by joy?*blink*trouble already?you mean mean creature"The semantics of it," He stated, looking at the open door. "Shouldn't you say 'The goblins, we had the advantage.' And shouldn't I say' yes i suppose you do. My people were acting out of desperation." - sad but lolhe doesn't miss the sun??as always, love you *snuggles*