|Reviews for A Tear|
| Michelle Munoz 8/18/05 . chapter 1
This was perfect for me to read for the mood I'm currently in -_-. Lovely,
| Stephen Haramis 12/26/04 . chapter 1
I really liked the personification of the tear, great poem and really gives the reader the sense of loneliness
| sonata luna 12/25/04 . chapter 1
Nice rythym, I like the last line... I'd like to request though that in the future you write a summary. If you have no idea what to write for a summary, take a look at summaries of stories that appeal to you and see what you like, then imitate it. Either way, good job for a love poem...
| Ruby Woo 12/25/04 . chapter 1
A clever comparison, and very easy to feel what you're talking about. Well done.