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Reviews For: Christmas Afternoon
catseyeview 2004-12-30 . chapter 1
I feel like I'm home. I love your descriptions of the typical Christmas day with family.
negligible fictional force 2004-12-25 . chapter 1
i hate exclamation marks but heyhey, they have a purpose here. i like this, though i don't love it. bahaha. i'm not quite a christmas person. still, you describe well as usual, and the scene is well built up. booyah! kismet.
Manuel Fajar 2004-12-25 . chapter 1
Laden with subtle irony and satire. Should be labeled—take in small doses, lest your fragile veneer split asunder. m
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