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| myno 2005-01-29 ch 1,  | abusei like the irregular format, because it gives a visual image of chaos. The poem isn't your best, but you get the idea across. |
| lazygun 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abusewoah. rather intense, yet still quite good! |
| Quaint Feathers (Unavailabl... 2004-12-28 ch 1, | abuseDamn, interesting, very well written from a childs point of veiw i like it, keep up the good work! |
| DeViLDaughTeR 2004-12-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is quiet good. Creepy and scary. Awesome. Simply that. |
| simpleplan13 2004-12-26 ch 1, | abusefirst off you can write worth a darn and second off this is ** AMAZING.. tis so sad and powerful and beautifully written |
| Marth Azumi 2004-12-26 ch 1, | abuseWow...this was...chilling. It's written really well from the child's point of view..damn. This is Fav. Stories for sure. Really well written. |
| contrast and friction 2004-12-25 ch 1, | abuseThat's really sad..I have shivers down my spine.. |