This poem reminds me of some of my creations, where I repeat words and sentances. Some of my fellow writers don't like that, but screw them it makes a good poem. Personally I cannot relate emotionally to this piece because I've never had a boyfriend :( Again, a job well done.

Reminds me about the first three months after I broke up with my ex-boyfriend..it was agonizing.

Loved the tinge of helplessness and desperation that you managed to portray. Keep it up.

On a side note, I'd like to thank you for your review on my one-shot, "If Your Heart's Not In It". I was really touched..*sniffs* Thanks so much, and keep up the good work!

wow i really like the sad feelings of this poem. it's really good the way u expressed it. keep writing!

WOW! i -love- this. on my faves. *woo* i love the rhyming and the feeling... go you!

aw...:'(. lets hope this isnt based on something from your life, cuz that'd be sad. :( guys SUCK, dont they? :P

great poetry again. one minor mistake: in the 7th line, it should be 'your', not 'you're'.

I thought it was very beautiful, I liked it. Good job!

I'm in a similiar position right now. I can't remember, I can't forget, LIFE IS HARD lol. Well it's a well written poem and true to life, which I love.

This was really great. I've been here and felt this and you explained it beautifully. Great job!

~Nikki~

P.s. Thank you so much for your reviews on Castle Cintyras!

Thisis a brilliant poem, well done.

This is another great poem! It reminds me of when my first boyfriend left me... You're friend, ~Melissa~

Aka: ~La Señorita Maria~

Ps. If you're interested, check out some of my stuff... my penname is zeusfluff. just look up my penname in search... Thanx so much, ~Melissa~

Yeah, you know how many different kinds of poems like this there are? Millions...but this one seems so...unique...I wonder why.