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| linaeve 2005-01-02 ch 1,  | abusehaha. though mathematics might as well be my middle name, i can wholly sympathise with your poem. to me, math never 'fills' my head-- it simply exists there; when i do maths, it filters through... more 'trickling' than 'whizzing', i s'pose. you captured the emotion very nicely, nonetheless! ^^; -lin |
| Nameless Melancholy 2005-01-02 ch 1, | abuselol!! i hate math. i liked 'I carve you with my ballpoint as you fill..' |
| moonarised polane 2004-12-31 ch 1, | abusewhoa. not bad. nice piece here. was just doing maths today by orders from the powers above. nice descriptions here. personally, i don't really like 2 liner poems, but i shall make an exception for this piece. (: happy new year. |
| tablesalt 2004-12-27 ch 1, | abuseI hate math too. Love the way you describe its horrors. Well done. (: |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-12-26 ch 1, | abuse¿And what if math was just a quirky language our mind uses to express its quantum dynamic state of being? m |
| Gaki Toki 2004-12-26 ch 1, | abuse*snarling angrily* I hate numbers...*barks* I hate math...I sit in my dark hole and watch as they pass by me on their nightly rounds, looking for the poor writer to torture! Die numbers...for I have longed to kill you...make you suffer... ...nice...for a poem about my worst ememies...*barks again, eye twitching* |
| catseyeview 2004-12-26 ch 1, | abuseI especially love the dance of your first two lines in my imagery. wonderful poem. |
| negligible fictional force 2004-12-26 ch 1, | abuselike the new style lovely. it's wonderfully contemporary yes and relate-able. relativity, yeah? like it. dig the flow. -kismet. |