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linaeve
2005-01-02
ch 1,
abusehaha. though mathematics might as well be my middle name, i can wholly sympathise with your poem. to me, math never 'fills' my head-- it simply exists there; when i do maths, it filters through... more 'trickling' than 'whizzing', i s'pose.

you captured the emotion very nicely, nonetheless! ^^;

-lin
Nameless Melancholy
2005-01-02
ch 1,
abuselol!! i hate math. i liked 'I carve you with my ballpoint as you fill..'
moonarised polane
2004-12-31
ch 1,
abusewhoa. not bad. nice piece here. was just doing maths today by orders from the powers above.

nice descriptions here. personally, i don't really like 2 liner poems, but i shall make an exception for this piece. (:

happy new year.
tablesalt
2004-12-27
ch 1,
abuseI hate math too. Love the way you describe its horrors. Well done. (:
Manuel Fajar
2004-12-26
ch 1,
abuse¿And what if math was just a quirky language our mind uses to express its quantum dynamic state of being? m
Gaki Toki
2004-12-26
ch 1,
abuse*snarling angrily* I hate numbers...*barks* I hate math...I sit in my dark hole and watch as they pass by me on their nightly rounds, looking for the poor writer to torture! Die numbers...for I have longed to kill you...make you suffer...

...nice...for a poem about my worst ememies...*barks again, eye twitching*
catseyeview
2004-12-26
ch 1,
abuseI especially love the dance of your first two lines in my imagery. wonderful poem.
negligible fictional force
2004-12-26
ch 1,
abuselike the new style lovely. it's wonderfully contemporary yes and relate-able. relativity, yeah? like it. dig the flow. -kismet.
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