I love the bitter angle of it all. It all flowed together and was patient for the ending. Nothing seemed rushed or out of place. Great Job.

That's really awesome! The way you wrote and the anger and bitterness could be felt. That really was awesome!

I like it...

Ofcourse it lacks all the standard things I look for usually.. but that's okay for this poem, 'cause it still works.

However, if I was you I'd format it even more like a letter, maybe even put some metophorical adress, etc.

How very superior! He sounds like such an air head... Splendid. I heart your work! Please, oh, please write more like this!

Joe.

The angel wallowed in death.

Wowers. I really like the description and the metaphors, good job displaying your emotions in such a beautiful way. I would have just been like DFGKJHFKDHGAKL. I guess this kind of shows your personality, how you write. You think poetically:)

I love the poem, but I know strong emotions lay behind it. Stay strong baby. I love you.

Remember, be a fighter.

Oh my god. This was so beautiful. -gasp- I love it. Its now on my favorite lists. It shows every emotion as to which I feel at times.

Read and review my new stuff. :D

Oh... This would make a good angry heavy metal song... \m/

god that was so ment for my ex :-)