Reviews for Just Show Me The Light

Marisa 2005-07-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseMy favorite so far. It flowed, it connected with me, I loved it.
ludicrous louie 2005-04-02 ch 1, anon.	abusewow...that was incredible! i really liked it...not too much more to say about it except that it really good...and original!
A-wolf-called-Skya 2005-03-31 ch 1,	abuseit is dreamy, isn't it O-O good job thou. the imagery was well done. my favorite lines were these ones: To lands beneath the seasTo oceans above the clouds i love thoose lines ^^ they are wonderfully done!! good writing, -Rachel. Every legend leaves a mark
Leader of the Mushroom Mili... 2005-01-09 ch 1,	abuseTee hee ^^ Yes, I see what you mean - same titles. Nice poem though, it brings cool picures to mind XD 'dragons asleep' ... yes, cool ^^
Princess-anna57 2005-01-07 ch 1,	abuseAn absolutely gorgeous poem! So well written... well done!-Anna :)
Coni 2004-12-30 ch 1, anon.	abusecute! ^^ Yay for Author Alerts! This reminds me of "Give me the Light" by Sean Paul...I had it stuck in my head. :D
Kalt 2004-12-27 ch 1,	abuseThat was great. you did a really nice job!!
amazingblazes 2004-12-26 ch 1,	abuseThis is really cool! I was a little thrown off by the use of "thy" in the second paragraph though. You could be a little more consistant there. In any case, this was a beautiful poem. I could picture the castle, and the clouds and the dragons all perfectly. Absoballylutely beautiful!
freetofly 2004-12-26 ch 1,	abusenice job