My favorite so far. It flowed, it connected with me, I loved it.

wow...that was incredible! i really liked it...not too much more to say about it except that it really good...and original!

it is dreamy, isn't it O-O good job thou. the imagery was well done. my favorite lines were these ones:

To lands beneath the seasTo oceans above the clouds

i love thoose lines ^^ they are wonderfully done!!

good writing,

-Rachel.

*Every legend leaves a mark*

Tee hee ^^ Yes, I see what you mean - same titles. Nice poem though, it brings cool picures to mind XD 'dragons asleep' ... yes, cool ^^

An absolutely gorgeous poem! So well written... well done!-Anna :)

cute! ^^ Yay for Author Alerts! This reminds me of "Give me the Light" by Sean Paul...I had it stuck in my head. :D

That was great. you did a really nice job!!

This is really cool! I was a little thrown off by the use of "thy" in the second paragraph though. You could be a little more consistant there. In any case, this was a beautiful poem. I could picture the castle, and the clouds and the dragons all perfectly. Absoballylutely beautiful!

nice job