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Reviews For: Just Show Me The Light
Marisa 2005-07-24 . chapter 1
My favorite so far. It flowed, it connected with me, I loved it.
ludicrous louie 2005-04-02 . chapter 1
wow...that was incredible! i really liked it...not too much more to say about it except that it really good...and original!
A-wolf-called-Skya 2005-03-31 . chapter 1
it is dreamy, isn't it O-O good job thou. the imagery was well done. my favorite lines were these ones:

To lands beneath the seasTo oceans above the clouds

i love thoose lines ^^ they are wonderfully done!!

good writing,

-Rachel.

*Every legend leaves a mark*
Leader of the Mushroom Militia 2005-01-09 . chapter 1
Tee hee ^^ Yes, I see what you mean - same titles. Nice poem though, it brings cool picures to mind XD 'dragons asleep' ... yes, cool ^^
Princess-anna57 2005-01-07 . chapter 1
An absolutely gorgeous poem! So well written... well done!-Anna :)
Coni 2004-12-30 . chapter 1
cute! ^^ Yay for Author Alerts! This reminds me of "Give me the Light" by Sean Paul...I had it stuck in my head. :D
Kalt 2004-12-27 . chapter 1
That was great. you did a really nice job!!
amazingblazes 2004-12-26 . chapter 1
This is really cool! I was a little thrown off by the use of "thy" in the second paragraph though. You could be a little more consistant there. In any case, this was a beautiful poem. I could picture the castle, and the clouds and the dragons all perfectly. Absoballylutely beautiful!
freetofly 2004-12-26 . chapter 1
nice job
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