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| Marisa 2005-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseMy favorite so far. It flowed, it connected with me, I loved it. |
| ludicrous louie 2005-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abusewow...that was incredible! i really liked it...not too much more to say about it except that it really good...and original! |
| A-wolf-called-Skya 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseit is dreamy, isn't it O-O good job thou. the imagery was well done. my favorite lines were these ones: To lands beneath the seasTo oceans above the clouds i love thoose lines ^^ they are wonderfully done!! good writing, -Rachel. *Every legend leaves a mark* |
| Leader of the Mushroom Mili... 2005-01-09 ch 1, | abuseTee hee ^^ Yes, I see what you mean - same titles. Nice poem though, it brings cool picures to mind XD 'dragons asleep' ... yes, cool ^^ |
| Princess-anna57 2005-01-07 ch 1, | abuseAn absolutely gorgeous poem! So well written... well done!-Anna :) |
| Coni 2004-12-30 ch 1, anon. | abusecute! ^^ Yay for Author Alerts! This reminds me of "Give me the Light" by Sean Paul...I had it stuck in my head. :D |
| Kalt 2004-12-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was great. you did a really nice job!! |
| amazingblazes 2004-12-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is really cool! I was a little thrown off by the use of "thy" in the second paragraph though. You could be a little more consistant there. In any case, this was a beautiful poem. I could picture the castle, and the clouds and the dragons all perfectly. Absoballylutely beautiful! |
| freetofly 2004-12-26 ch 1, | abusenice job |