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| The Lovely Pan 2007-05-10 ch 2,  | abuseCool you updateded. awesome! naw, colby seems fine.its cute that he is naive like that. |
| neongoldtooth 2006-11-26 ch 2, | abuseAw this hasn't been updated in forever! Please write more! |
| I.F. 2006-07-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseUpdate this, UPDATE THIS! |
| whyme300 2006-07-02 ch 2, | abuseAHH *squee* Colby is so adorable...his naivety makes him even more so!! I imagine Marcus to be like my hot black friend Walter!! They are both so nice too!! I can't wait to see what happens between Marcus and Colby and to see what Shawn does (little punk) X3 |
| Ghost 2006-05-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseo.0 I wuv Colby and Marcus I want to hug them and hold them captive in my closet...that sounded weird. Meh update soon pwease? |
| Jade 2006-03-24 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is so cute. Colby is just perfect. Please keep on writing.Thanks. |
| JPhinala 2006-03-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseI like this one. Not as much as the others, but it's good. All of your stuff is. :) Well, I'm going to start another one now. -James |
| Esquirella 2006-02-13 ch 2, | abuseHow'd I miss this update? COOL one! Are you continuing? |
| kylie 2005-10-29 ch 2, anon. | abusei absolutley love this story.. colby is so cute! please write more! ^_^ |
| Shonen Nagasaki 2005-09-01 ch 2, | abuseThat was So adorable! Colby and Marcus make such a cute pre-couple. And Katie reminds me of my very own friend named Katty. Please update soon! |
| Yelizaveta 2005-08-31 ch 2, | abuseomg... you have to continue this... you just HAVE to. |
| Cherise 2005-08-22 ch 2, anon. | abuseColby is THE sweetest little thing! He's so naive, but at the same time, so open minded, and that makes him awesome! All the other charecters seems sweet too! (except for Sean) Whenever someone's dealing with Colby, they just act so much nicer! |
| hanakimi 2005-08-19 ch 2, anon. | abusewonderful beautiful Izzy-chan PLEASE update!! *bows to the wonderfulness* |
| Oona-ee 2005-08-15 ch 2, | abuseaw!!.. i just love Colby!!.. he's such a sweetheart!!.. -^^-but i got a question.. how come Colby always stutters like that?.. does it have something to do with his past or something?.. anyway, great story!!.. i just LOVE it!!.. xD and i dont think you made Colby naive or childish at all.. update soon! :] |
| smilebomb 2005-08-12 ch 2, | abuseAH! There's something about your writing style that I really like!~ I'll be watching you..in a non creepy way, of course o_o;. |