Gorgeous and insightful. It's too bad that not many people have learned this life lesson properly.

Praise: I can't help but smile at this. I often find myself in a similar situation , which made it all the more personal for me. Amazing poem. I can't find anything wrong with it ! ^__^

~* Noelle O.O;V *~

o wow, i love this poem, so beautifully put and staged, really got absorbed in the mood of it, excellent job

Ooh...I like this a lot! You really are a very talented author...I love the last two verses...quite uncommon if you ask me ^_^. Very nice! Love, Mia

it's amazing how just a few words put together can be so meaningful. you did a great job =0)

I didn't like it as much as... what's it called? harbinger, but it was still good. Again very mysterious (or maybe I'm just shallow and I can't see the deeper meaning, lol) that's a very probable possiblity :)

Great write my friend!

short but fantastic. i love it.

Sad and ...sad. Is effaced a word? Anyway, i like it. it fits the feeling.

sirius chathamps r/r my stuff too

I love the last two lines. This is really good.