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DarkPiro 2005-01-24 . chapter 9
yay! go angel!
DarkPiro 2005-01-18 . chapter 7
i no what happened :p ~/¿?~ QUOTE ~?¿\~"Who gives a damn about Tenille or Ash?" (Dez: Amen!) AMEN! ahem and... u called stan staci! hah! u need an editor and JACK fell in love with a unicorn!? i thought he liked Jill! :p VP 4 eva!! lol and the purple slitted eye thing it what is allways freaken u out in dreams rite? at least thats what u told me IM NOT PHYSIC! or am i?! DUN DUN DUN! ha awesom chapt!!
suzenkou 2005-01-17 . chapter 7
Arrow..in the head...someone shot you in the head...AND IT WASN'T ME? >_< Nuu! Not fair! damn you god! lol

XD Update soon or els-wait a second..your already dead...;_; dangit...
suzenkou 2005-01-16 . chapter 6
Oo; well..that was ...a tad confussing. lol Meez read it again until i get it right...=@_@=;

lol Anyways, glad ya updated.^^ Do it again...SOON!! >=D
Peeka-chan 2005-01-16 . chapter 6
Otto? Olivia? Wow. Things sure have changed. Now write more! This is getting interesting!

Peeka-chan
Staci 2005-01-14 . chapter 6
Wow Tenille! Good job. It's interesting! Update soon, I wanna read! :p
DEZ 2005-01-13 . chapter 5
YAYZ! awesom i should have met the other me tho!! lol and yay we were in a game!
Peeka-chan 2005-01-09 . chapter 4
BOOM!

*evil giggle*

-Peeka-chan
DarkPiro 2005-01-08 . chapter 4
yo... nice chapter... oh yeah elves speak elvish not french.. >.>* anyays Snakes r cool!! except when theyr all evil an **... oh well they still rox!!
Staci 2005-01-08 . chapter 4
Eek!! Snakes. Not Good. :P Great chapter, little late though, eh? =) Haha. Keep the updates coming!
P-chan (2 lzy...again 2005-01-03 . chapter 3
WHAT?? WHAT? WHO IS MRS. NANNY?

UPDATE OR FEAR MY WRATH!

Peeka-chan
Justine 2005-01-03 . chapter 3
O! me like, yes! But Tenille, I mean really, you being gay! Thats Sick!lol! great Chapter!
Staci 2004-12-28 . chapter 1
Nille! You never told me you had a new story! Luckily I checked on my own. =) I really like this story. It's hilarious! Update SOON! =P
Peeka-chan (2 lzy... 2004-12-28 . chapter 2
Here's just a scene that just kept playing and playing over and over in my mind.

~*~*Right before the battle (still marching)*~*~

*blue and purpled headed girls appear*

Purple hair: WE WANT TO JOIN TOO!

Ash: But you’re girls!

Purple hair: What. Did. You. Say?

Blue hair: If we had truly wanted to hurt you, we would of used the sniper rifle in the trees and picked you off one by one.

Ash: Rifles?

Purple hair: A fancy name for a long gun.

Ash: *stiffens* gun?

Blue hair: Yeppers! We’re here on a mission to see someone who’s Lollander’s boyfriend and mentally scars people!

You: *steps forward* Yes?

Purple and Blue hair: *grab both of your arms* You’re coming with us. Peeka-chan is very impatient with you. You need to update more.

Everyone else in the army: O.O

You: Okay, okay, I’ll update more! Tell Peeka-chan not to be impatient!

Both girls: You’re telling us? We’re her minions!

You: Okay, give her this note. *hands note*

Note: I O U new chapters soon. Tenille.

Girls: *walk onto a hill and disappear* BYE!

Chibi: *spots enemies* For Imagination Nation!

~*~*Battle Starts*~*~

Well did you like it? This gives me power, power! *evil laugh* Now you must update.

Comments:

You’re pregnant again? Wow.

IT GOES BOOM! Another one of my psychotic daydreams. Things go Boom! *evil grin*

10 STARS! It went…BOOM!

Yeah, I better go before I scare anyone else.

Toodles!

Peeka-chan
DarkPiro 2004-12-27 . chapter 2
I have 4 things to say to you!1: OTTOS A GIRL!?!? wow thats a mind boggler... ottos a guys name...2: Ellas a prep... dont deny it ... you allready tired that.3: when are the rest of us gonna reenter the story?... angel, me, justiene, sasuke, heidi, elijah, liz, ect...4: write more or die ... j/k ... OR AM I? DUN DUN DUN! ... im so mature.
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