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AKlimesh 2008-10-04 ch 1,	abuseI like it. Keep updating it for me ;)
Trace Dragon 2007-03-19 ch 8,	abuseAwesome! I love it! Trevor is emo! J/K. I really enjoyed reading chapters 7&8. I really needed to read something like this after my huge move. Keep writing and don't kill Trevor. And what is Trevor thinking about letting Axel into Sewer World?! I guess I'll have to wait nad see what Chapter 9 brings. sits in front of computer screen Hm. Oh yeah! Thanks for this story and no need to apologize for taking so long. I know how that is. I need to update my stories soon. ^^;
SwordOfLightBladeOfDarkness 2007-03-19 ch 2,	abusethis is really good! keep it up!
On Wings of Dreams 2007-01-03 ch 1,	abuseI'm guessing that Charlie is his dad. ~ angel_of_mint ~
Mikki Amboree 2006-07-11 ch 7,	abuseHave I ever told you how awesome this story is? I __> / nit pick \ /start just chatting \ Oh, and I've started using the word "gwee." 'Tis very addicting... The next step after D&D is LARP. ^^ I recomend NERO. That's where I play. xD I never played D&D b/c it's "evil" [according to my mom] sighs I dunno, I went straight to LARP and don't see how I can sit around for hours. I'll have to see, my dad has been trying to get me into it for the longest time. Lol. You da bomb! is backing away now
NightOwlscribe 2006-05-24 ch 6,	abuseExcuse me! Dresses are a fine article of clothing...that is, for girls only in my oppinion! (Just teasing!) Anyways, I'm luvin' this story so update soon! And I was this dad to come back, but w/o the torture. Does he know that Shadow is his son? I was never really sure if he had realized or not... Update soon! ~NightOwlScribe
Mikki Amboree 2006-03-17 ch 6,	abusefalls over laughing Wow... that last part just threw off the sadness of poor little Halyn's death. Omg... imagine if Halyn was still alive and had to go on the assignment! Halyn: Wow! This is so much fun! I think blue is totally my color! And look your dress matches your eyes! giggles Shadow: fumes Halyn: Aw... don't sag your shoulders like that! Hold them back and puff out your chest! Shadow: presses down urge to strangle Halyn Halyn: dances around completely oblivious to the death glares Ha ha... whoo... I need to find that picture. evil grin
Mikki Amboree 2006-03-15 ch 4,	abusecries her eyes out WHY!? Why Nora? WHY!? You evil, evil writer!! cries Anyway, great chapter. You're such an awesome writer!! @_@
Mikki Amboree 2006-03-14 ch 3,	abuseGah... (sorry this will be brief) Nora and Joey made me mad. I know they don't know about the "art of war" but dang... pout
Mikki Amboree 2006-03-14 ch 2,	abuseWhoa! Interesting twist there! Amazing work! Poor Trevor... he needs Nora to comfort him...
Mikki Amboree 2006-03-14 ch 1,	abuseOh my gosh... I don't normally review when there's more chapters to read, but dang, you have some serious talent! I love this story! You've really pulled me into it with this first chapter.
Trace Dragon 2006-03-01 ch 6,	abuseWhoa! 0.0 Trevor in a dress! I'd like to see that. Where was the picture? Anyway, there were a few mistakes in spelling and a few spaces were left out. Other wise it was good! Love the story keep writing, can't wait for the next chapter. sits down and waits for the next chapter This is taking forever, but it always does when I like the story.
jpmoore 2006-02-16 ch 6, anon.	abuseContinuing your writing (typing?) exellence! I wish you had more chapters posted! (hint hint)
jpmoore 2006-02-16 ch 4, anon.	abuseEXELLENT!
jpmoore 2006-02-15 ch 2, anon.	abuseI'm not very good at reviews, so I'll keep it short. I think this is one of the best stories I have ever read, and I look forward to reading the next chapters.

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