This scared the shiznaps outta me! I may be 13, but still I have an image of that bloody monster stuck in my mind. I guess that was your intention, though.

o, creepy yet a perfect ending. Bravo, great story. And you know, I never realized the accursed nature of the name John, but now that I think about it, it is true.

good ending, definetly a story by you. It has YOU written all over it, which isint a bad thing. I liked it.

Notneb

Lovely story reminds me of d20 modern.

Mat

Wow. This is an AMAZING story. I'm guessing it's already ended, with the blood and all.. But this was awesome. Heh.

Hey man, that was awesome. A nice original story, damn good quotes (Floyd, and the inside joke of "bad things happen to people named johnny") which were funny as well. Nice...

Whoa, that was a terrific story and I love the end of the 4th chapter.

O_o...very good, very creepy. More please!

Hey last reveiw don't worry bout my bad new to the site didn't know there was chapters.*Putting a giant L on his forehead.* No that was a really good story Joe keep it up.

What happened? *thinking* Wait its Joeseph, he died. Good story man your lucky i'm older or i would be kicking your butt for making me scared.

Gosh this story is the shizneck it would make a great movie.

Ma†

i feel really sorry for this kid, really i do! *hugs him while wacking the monster* get thee hence you weird thing you...lol but on a more serious note, very nice chapter! update soon! i was starting to wonder about this story!

The monster is really cool, a bit evil, but cool none the less. Poor Johnny.

Katlyn

That was totally chilling,is'nt it funny how the things we used to fear find there ways back to us all thanks to you! was great and awesome!Good work noveliest!

That chapter was awesome. I just love the how twisted you have made this story. I love it.