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| myno 2005-01-29 ch 1,  | abuseOh. wow. I know exactly how that feels. just...wow. |
| sunscraped. 2005-01-07 ch 1, | abuseI like the last line. Very good, but not as good as the first one i had read. And did fictionpress screw up your formatting?~! |
| Chris Taylor 2005-01-02 ch 1, | abuseomg, i dont know you, but PLEASE TELL ME this isnt true, i hate it when people think that drugs and suicide is the answer. anyways, this was good otherwise, and it flowed nicely too. great work, and i'll check out that friend of yours, adidas. Peace and Chicken Grease |
| under estimated artistsoul 2004-12-29 ch 1, | abuseKayla I like this poem its the 1st of yours I've read. In case your wondering its 10th grader who rides your bus who's in your gym, who's saying this. I signed and account and I hope you know who this is cause if you don't your gonna get it in gym. Just kiddin Keep Writing Your Good At It!Later |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-12-27 ch 1, | abuseWhat circle of brutality. Painful to just read. m |
| simpleplan13 2004-12-27 ch 1, | abusewow.. very pwoerful and nicely written... I really like it... n ice rhymign too... great job |