The girl's death pains my heart. I think that "pregnant with hope" is a great metaphor.

morbidly beautiful.. what can i say?!
i love your writing.
its so powerful.
so moving.
keep writing!!

wow. you have a way with words that can make something so, morbid as suicide seem, pretty, i guess. not really the word i am looking for but...

Wow. I love the way it is written. Beautiful descriptions and nice imagery. It's a bit too sad- (I love sad stories ) it's perfect! I loved it. It's difficult for a compostion to take my breath away-well this one did. Poor Ophelia, having to go to the extremes to end up with her suffering.

Tragic yet beautiful.

Beautiful. I'm sorry I can't be more interesting but that's the best word I can think of - sad, wonderful, touching, beautiful.

Wow...morbid. Not that it's not good, just so...morbid. Deathly. Good description, though. It's sort of beautiful, in it's own weird, freakish way.Keep writing, I love your stories.

That was a very beautiful description of death, I must say, if death can ever be beautiful. And I liked the last sentence; it summed up the passage well. "She had thrown her breath away."

Wow...It's so sad!I love it!

Beautifully written... I especially liked the way you described how she "let go" without actually saying it outright. Nice work ^^.

you are an amazing writer. one thing though, how did she kill herself? You hint at a hanging but I'm not sure.

Wow. I love it. Your writing is beutiful. Your word choice is...unbeleivable...yea nothing to critizise here, so keep up the good work.

I like what you've written.