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| heidi.rebecca 2007-03-14 ch 1,  | abusemorbidly beautiful.. what can i say?! i love your writing. its so powerful. so moving. keep writing!! |
| -a-random-writer- 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abusewow. you have a way with words that can make something so, morbid as suicide seem, pretty, i guess. not really the word i am looking for but... |
| Perfect Bliss 2005-10-24 ch 1, | abuseWow. I love the way it is written. Beautiful descriptions and nice imagery. It's a bit too sad- (I love sad stories ) it's perfect! I loved it. It's difficult for a compostion to take my breath away-well this one did. Poor Ophelia, having to go to the extremes to end up with her suffering. Tragic yet beautiful. |
| Suzie 2005-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful. I'm sorry I can't be more interesting but that's the best word I can think of - sad, wonderful, touching, beautiful. |
| Someone 2005-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow...morbid. Not that it's not good, just so...morbid. Deathly. Good description, though. It's sort of beautiful, in it's own weird, freakish way.Keep writing, I love your stories. |
| S. Renee 2005-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was a very beautiful description of death, I must say, if death can ever be beautiful. And I liked the last sentence; it summed up the passage well. "She had thrown her breath away." |
| xraspberrykissesx 2005-01-02 ch 1, | abuseWow...It's so sad!I love it! |
| dust2dust 2004-12-28 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written... I especially liked the way you described how she "let go" without actually saying it outright. Nice work ^^. |
| Lykaios 2004-12-27 ch 1, | abuseyou are an amazing writer. one thing though, how did she kill herself? You hint at a hanging but I'm not sure. |
| ErgoSchmergo 2004-12-27 ch 1, | abuseWow. I love it. Your writing is beutiful. Your word choice is...unbeleivable...yea nothing to critizise here, so keep up the good work. |
| aims80 2004-12-27 ch 1, | abuseI like what you've written. |