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| simpleplan13 2007-12-28 ch 82,  | abusevery powerful |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-24 ch 81, | abusethe rhyming is great... i like it a lot |
| BlackArc 2007-10-13 ch 3, | abuseHm, I'm not exactly sure what I'm thinking abpit this one. at first I did not like the ryhming of the first stanza. Nonetheless, looking forward to more. |
| BlackArc 2007-10-13 ch 2, | abuseThis is completely sensuous with hot lust dripped in sin! I absolutely love this and will continue to read this. 78 wonderful chapters, heh, looks like I'm going to be having some fun. |
| simpleplan13 2007-08-03 ch 76, | abusevery sweet... I really love hte lat line |
| simpleplan13 2007-07-24 ch 73, | abusethis made me hungry.. lol.. great imagery |
| k.a.o 2007-04-25 ch 5, anon. | abusegodamn! ur poems are interesting. you have good vocabulary and although your poems are "graphic" i guess. it makes it even better. never seen anyone right like this. keep writing im out |
| simpleplan13 2007-02-03 ch 72, | abusewow... yea I cant think of anything else to say...lol |
| simpleplan13 2007-01-31 ch 71, | abusevery pretty |
| simpleplan13 2007-01-30 ch 70, | abuseinterestinf portrait of hidden love... the metaphor at the end was great |
| simpleplan13 2006-11-26 ch 69, | abusei agree for the most part... but sometimes not so much.. although i have no idea where my piece came from bc ive never experienced it.. lol One thing its story id 2163741... you forgot the 4 :) |
| simpleplan13 2006-10-18 ch 68, | abusei read the thing and im like wait... my poem?...lol.. anyhow great piece |
| simpleplan13 2006-09-24 ch 67, | abusevery cool... nice summary of the horrible story i ahd to read freshman year lol |
| simpleplan13 2006-09-11 ch 66, | abuseI really like hte descriptions in the beginning great piece |
| Princess-anna57 2006-08-13 ch 66, | abuseGreat work, I like this! Exams are over, yay. hehe. Hope to hear from you soon! Bye for now, and keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |