Hello, my dear, long time no read...

I could feel a very strong sense of connection with this, from the lovers: "My blood beats inside you as a seed" to the connection between food, almonds, mangos, and sexuality. It was all very insicive. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.

"In mango kisses laced with cinnamon."... Love that line. It's a really great description. The whole piece has good descriptions. nice job.

very powerful

the rhyming is great... i like it a lot

Hm, I'm not exactly sure what I'm thinking abpit this one. at first I did not like the ryhming of the first stanza. Nonetheless, looking forward to more.

This is completely sensuous with hot lust dripped in sin! I absolutely love this and will continue to read this. 78 wonderful chapters, heh, looks like I'm going to be having some fun.

very sweet... I really love hte lat line

this made me hungry.. lol.. great imagery

godamn! ur poems are interesting. you have good vocabulary and although your poems are "graphic" i guess. it makes it even better. never seen anyone right like this. keep writing im out

wow... yea I cant think of anything else to say...lol

very pretty

interestinf portrait of hidden love... the metaphor at the end was great

i agree for the most part... but sometimes not so much.. although i have no idea where my piece came from bc ive never experienced it.. lol

One thing its story id 2163741... you forgot the 4 :)

i read the thing and im like wait... my poem?...lol.. anyhow great piece

very cool... nice summary of the horrible story i ahd to read freshman year lol