It's an interesting poem. I like the whole concept of personifying the whole thing. It's a good poem. It had an interesting aproach, and it's fresh. Good work.

chrys

What? I definitely didn't get an author alert for this... *glares daggers at FP* Anyway, you know I think this is awesome... and that I thought it was a really awesome song by like.. I don't know. One of those awesome, poeticly genius foreign Gothic bands I so love... it's that good, and I can just hear it being made into this gorgeous musical piece... m... anyway, you know I love this. I really do... and I'm so happy to see you wrote another thing! YAY! *favorites*

i think your new style worked well for you! great imagery and description... this is a great poem!

~Lauren

beautiful structure imagery and whatnot; this poem flows silksmooth, and it's a successful experiment, i declare. -kismet.

This is a lovely pom. ^-^ Sweet and intense. Pretty yet beautiful. ::adds to fav. stories lists.:: Well done !! Vn.nV

~ Noelle ~

i like it... a very cool new format.. merry xmas and happy new years to you too!

"Her name is JusticeYet her body is Sin"

Sweet and nice. Interesting style. I'm a bit in the stupid, blur mode right now so I can't really decipher what the poem's about but I do like the images. Doesn't seem as deep - or is the proper word somber? - as your other poems but new style. *thumbs up*

Izzy J.