wow. I just read through all five parts of this peice and I have to say that it very moving. Many people don't realize that their actions have such an effect on those around them...

I read everyone of your entries, and I love the way you express yourself. Good job indeed.

This is great. I like the style. Sorry I haven't reviewed for ages. I'm making up for it now. Excellently written, good imagery.

wow. . .thats scary powerful. .. the whole. . .collection? I dunno what you'd call it. . .try amazing, I guess. . .but you got one thing wrong, you aren't alone.

wow... very powerful especially the ending

that's interesting... i like it... nice repition

aw very sad... I know this feeling... very powerful and well done

wow.. very sad and that ending is very powerful.. awesome job

wow.. very powerful.. especially the ending

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I remember when cutting was what I had . . . hope you don't get as bad as I do, that is if you keep on with it . . . I think this is great writing and I love it all. I'd love to hear this one day. Great job Kasey. (BTW please review my new 2 works? Please :D)

The writing . . . the emotion . . . all of it is so sad, so beautifully sad, so fragile, so greatly expressed . . . I think this is a great 5 part song. Onto the last

You're pretty damn good. I love the way you write, you're awesome. The emotion, the feelings, everything, you kick **. Seriously.

Oh, the rhyming scheme is perfect here, it fits with the song and makes sense. It's so sad, and I hope it ain't true, but this is so good. Next chapter

Wow, this is good . . . like really good . . . I love the (familiar) line 'This house is just a broken home' . . . .and love the fire images . . . it's sad, but I love sad. Good work on this one.