I adored the second stanza. Wonderful irony in this - I really enjoyed reading it.

~ CoolBeans18s

I loved the first stanza, and then the rest of the poem was wonderful as well. Great write my friend! I loved the ending also :)

really loved the third line of this, interesting last line as well, muchly enjoyed this, very well written

Hmm...someone's on a writing roll! Merry (be-lated) Christmas by the way, and Happy New Year (early)! I simply love your metaphores and imagery...they're so amazing! I envy your talent at writing like this...it's simply brilliant! Write more! Love, Mia

The tragedy of life is that most die unprepared to go. You capture that irony well. m