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| RunFree 2008-04-13 ch 6,  | abusegood... |
| gezabelle 2005-12-16 ch 6, anon. | abuseso wheres chapters 7-9??lol this is a great story and funny... at least post the next two chapters, *especially if the next one is your favorite?! lol thnx |
| Violent Pornography 2005-08-14 ch 6, | abuseGreat story, I really like it. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| eTeRnaL wiNDs 2005-07-29 ch 6, anon. | abusewow your fantasy was awesome! i like how Dare sticks up to Iris...i hate it when no one dares to speak to princesses in that way ugh. but Dare isn't like that haha :) anyway UPDATE!! btw i love Seeing Through Tears as well! these two stories are so awesome in their different ways :) UPDATE! UPDATE! |
| retoxrainbow 2005-06-26 ch 6, | abuseA new chapter! Yay! Giffer is pointing out how interested they are in each other, lol. Great chapter! |
| Karuli 2005-06-22 ch 6, | abuseyay, new chap! cant wait for next. aw, dare's falling for iris now. how old is giffer? cuz he acts like he's six or something. |
| florida 2005-06-22 ch 6, | abuseOOH!! I wonder what will happen in the next chapter? Tipsy on ale? This could get interesting. I don't care if you rewrite the next chapters as long as you have the nest one poster by... oh I don't know...tomorow? You really have to finish this story, I rate it as #1! It is so good! Wait if this is your writting before...what is it like now?hm...~florida |
| florida 2005-06-22 ch 5, | abuseYes a longer chapter! But now that there not argueing anymore, how will I be entertained? This new guy and Dare better annoy each other or else it wont be as funny anymore... Cries~florida |
| florida 2005-06-22 ch 4, | abuseHaha! This should be amuseing, Iris and Dare on a quest...together... that just doesn't work. ~florida |
| florida 2005-06-22 ch 3, | abuseDare is awsome! But I still say that Iris is better. Now it's really getting late... oh well got to keep reading, I've the got the other 3 chapters to read before I got to sleep.~florida |
| florida 2005-06-22 ch 2, | abuseThis one was just as good if not better! I'm starting to really like Iris, she sounds rally kool. You know she's not that princess in destrest sorta person. Great, it's late and now your makeing me keep reading these things. STOP MAKEING YOUR STORY SO GOOD! It's all you fault if I'm tired tommorow. |
| florida 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseOh MY GOD! this is so awsome! What do you mean your first two chapters would be boreing this first one was GREAT! I really hate this Harriett girl though she's sounds like a teacher, and teachers remind my about school. The horror. I wonder if she has to do with anything on this up comming attack? Well i've got to keep reading the rest of the chapters...~florida |
| AIAK 2005-06-10 ch 5, | abuseWonderful. However, I'd change the rating to a little higher. |
| Karuli 2005-06-02 ch 5, | abuseLuvin the story. Can't wait for update. |
| roxy-babe912 2005-05-10 ch 5, | abuseWell its good. But get into the romance more !! |