Ooh, great so far. Only very few gammar/spelling errors, all or most of which are probably just overlooked typos. Anyways, please update it soon! I must know what happens next!

TATSU! YOU! *pounce* ahem..okay..i will keep in mind that this isn't a letter, but erm..*thinks* ah! yeah! the story!O.O GREAT story! lol i love reading them..they have so much erm...what's the word i'm looking for...um...depth! and intriguing (definiely know i mispelled that) ideas! they're just great and amazing. it truly takes someone talented to go create a character and then become them, and that's what we (the readers) are looking for. The best aspect of this story is how it just captivates you from the very beginning, the title just makes it mysterious o.- which is great because it makes us want to know more. And the humor is great, every story must have at least some humor..unless it's some boring history book x.x you know how those can be. And i love how the main character changes throughout his years, he falls in love with Fuei! that right there just hooks me, i'm a sucker for good romance and adventure. And your words are very descriptive and percise, never while reading the story was i lost. well it's about 2 in the morning here and i'm getting sleepy, i shall flatter you more tomorrow! and i see you used Diamonte as teh kingdom XD you should hear him boasting about it x.x I know you'll make a great novelest (x.x another mispelled word!) in the future, i'm so proud of how your work has flourished throughout the years, and i look forward to seeing your books and MANGA! sold in stores someday, >.> speaking of which..i better get discounts on!^_^ and keep up the good work! o.-

Much Wuv,Mona

I look forward to reading the next part of this story!