 Traced In Green 2005-01-10 . chapter 1Oh beautiful! A very nice idea for a poem, very creative. Loved it. Thank you lots for your review! |
 Cloud Burst 2004-12-31 . chapter 1so beautiful and captivating!
lovely job! |
 The Magician (Joseph 2004-12-30 . chapter 1Beutiful I like how you portray Death, and how he is a recurring (character?) in your poetry, very nice done, niced anti suicide messages too good job.
The Magician |
 Judgement(Mathew 2004-12-29 . chapter 1Beatifull full of enemoures tradegy reminds me of Romeo and Juliet dare i say i envy you.
Ma† |
 pandora505 2004-12-28 . chapter 1So Death loved them? This is extraordinary, great job! |
 catseyeview 2004-12-28 . chapter 1I love the Romeo and Juliet feel to this poem, it takes me back to the tragic loves of the middle ages. |