Oh beautiful! A very nice idea for a poem, very creative. Loved it. Thank you lots for your review!

so beautiful and captivating!

lovely job!

Beutiful I like how you portray Death, and how he is a recurring (character?) in your poetry, very nice done, niced anti suicide messages too good job.

The Magician

Beatifull full of enemoures tradegy reminds me of Romeo and Juliet dare i say i envy you.

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So Death loved them? This is extraordinary, great job!

I love the Romeo and Juliet feel to this poem, it takes me back to the tragic loves of the middle ages.