Hay Cazz!I'm impressed by this piece because it provides a really gewd insight into how gurls really feel about guys. I neva knew thay could feel so special ova small intimidate things n i like wat u've done with it! Tha last sentence really swept tha whole poem of its feet! I'm not an expert writer but i really like how this story explodes tha emotion of gurls around guys:)Keep up tha great work!;)
What a fantastic question, "Why is that once you say my name I can hear it even in a crowded room?" I love this, it sums up what love is...all encompassing that it leaves out the masses to the one.
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