|Reviews for Visit me|
| Aero Faerie Extraordinaire 3/30/05 . chapter 1
I love the imagery. It's really good
| JJR Meerraf 1/1/05 . chapter 1
very romantic, very good. I loved it, and I loved reading new work of yours again! :), I checked the dates... six months since your last update?
Oh well, a great piece of work my friend, very heartfelt, very warm. Excellent work!
| H 1/1/05 . chapter 1
Hey, you're poems are ridiculously you don't want me to read anymore I won't, but you didn't exactly tell me I couldn't search for you ;)
See you soon, honey bee.
| in theory 1/1/05 . chapter 1
I really like this one, I got totally lost in it. Great descriptions too.
| myno 12/30/04 . chapter 1
Unusual imagery, you've done away with many of the overused cliches on this subject, and I like that. A couple favorite lines:"The bruised sky watches over" and "Your arms of warm, smooth, solid stone."I like those because the images are awesome, the bruised sky brings to mind the dark purple-ish gray clouds in a midnight blue night sky, and then the thought of arms made of warm stone... Cool poem.
| simpleplan13 12/28/04 . chapter 1
I really like it. dont delete it! its so beauitful and it could be sexual or not... but its beatifully written... hte perfect example of love ::sighs::
| erasedcrap 12/28/04 . chapter 1
Very good. Definitely sensual. Beautiful poem nicelu and has great subtle rhymes.