wow, so i'll be your first to review. I really liked this one, you have such interesting dreams then. i had a dream similar to this, but then... -dreamy smile-

now about your story. i think you have great talent, honestly, i think this will take you some-where. It's different, more compelling than you're others, it's more of a romance, but it still has the same 'theme' that shows up in all of your work.

Every author has the same theme, a theme that all your works take even if you try not to. Mine is evil,black magic your's is sad, i haven't quite worked it out yet, but i do certainly like this.

you should continue because YOU want to continue. don't rely on reviews to get you far -sideways glance-. i think you write beautifully.

-greMlin

heya! wow! interesting. i be reading this.