That's cool.. it made me think of Tori kinda, mostly with that "like the demon you are" line, I think.

I hope I can go down fighting.

This is a good poem.. It made me think of the fact that no matter what you do in life, you're still gonna sooner or later.

This is out of the ordinary. It sounds like your running not only from yourself, but also from some undescribable force. I mean I understand that its fate but it could be taken into more than just that. Ok, I'm a x-c runner and this kinda stuff gets my attention, this was great, but hey that just me. Later