First things first, here's my grammar nitpicks:
"chart different moments which I believe to have had an impact" is too formal for what is essentially a love confession. change it to something like "I remember certain moments clearer than others", something that has emotion and struggle in it.

"she was always so vain like that" change to "she was always vain" we "weren't" sure.

"with females, I knew that I wanted a male"

yummy! this is twincest isn't it?! *drools*

This is so twisted yet touching at the same time

OMG! I always see you like everywhere and I just never have checked out your stuff. Okay...when I think about this, I'm kinda torn and confused. Is he in lovw with his twin brother...or his mirror image? o.O PLease explain this strangeness. I liked it though! I'm gonna read your other stuff too..BYE

Well, this story was much better than i imagined it to be. When you said it was your proudest piece i can definatley see just why! Well done, i loved it!!

That was delightfully ambiguous ... :) I read it twice to clarify things. Keep up with the wonderfulness!

Ha! I got a mention. As I said before, its really good (at least I think I told you.) Oh well. One-shots rule the universe! Hahaha...Kids are adorable, aren't they?

-Your Partner In Murder- (*Cackles*)

Hey Emma! See, I told you I'd read your stories someday!

Now, on with the story, I'm just judging that he's in love with himself, yes? His reflection, that is. Whoa, I never really thought about anything like that. But it is interesting...AND WHERE THE ** ARE THE OTHER REVIEWS THIS STORY SHOULD HAVE?! ^_~