 I.O.K.O 2008-02-04 . chapter 1A very tense moment. |
 Eboniccinderella 2005-02-16 . chapter 1i don't know what this may be about.I think it is a conversation between to people,that is lacking in words,however,face expression and actions show that it's not a very happy interaction. |
 Joewhatever 2005-01-13 . chapter 1It seems like an attempt at a truce cut off before it could happen. Nice work, interesting imagery. |
 Infinite Smiles 2005-01-12 . chapter 1I like the choice of words. |
 Manuel Fajar 2005-01-01 . chapter 1Faces—grimaces,
Traces—Grim aces dealt out,
In love's poker game.
(¿In love's poker, gain?) —m— |
 Amaranth of Grey 2004-12-28 . chapter 1Interesting. I liked it. That whole open for interpretation thing is real neat. |
 DOORphrame 2004-12-28 . chapter 1I like the word choice you used. Keep writing. |