"Covered with nothing"... I love it! I cant really put into words what I felt when I read that last line. Very nice & very well written! I'm loving alot of your work! Definitely keep writing!

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Ouch. I really like this one, and the ideas it presents. Very very good job.

"Covered with nothing" - very good, thought provoking. Keep writing! PC

whoa! short! sad! beautiful! its a really nice poem! another great one. great job!

Wow...this one kind of hit me when I read it. It was quick and short but it had meaning to it...ending was really good...nice job!