lovley...so beautiful...i really enjoyed reading this!

I like it. makes me kind of wish i knew the native language to see it in the original form. oh well.

I love the ending, it was a beautiful way of stating things.

Keep it up.

That's nice. I like how you have it in both languages.

oo,i like this 1.i especially like the line 'mittimaein raetkae...'very sweet.

Cool. Wish I knew Hindi. The best I can do is badly butchered Russian. Anyway, good poem, keep writin'!