Different, but very good also. I like it, but I've always liked your work. It flowed really well also. Great work!

Beautiful...

i like it.. I knew that feeling once.. beuatifully written

Tis prettiful :-) I like the semi nonrhymingness of it, if that makes any sense..it flows.

This poem was really beautiful. I read it and keep thinking of bittersweet yet wonderful love *dreaming* It flowed on real nice :) good luck on coming poems! (you sure has a lot ;))They say you should critizise (sp?)but the only thing I find is that there are an awful lots of dots on the second line...:P

beautiful poem...