wow, that was awesome. when i first started to read it thought it would just be another pathetic writing atempt by a retard teen...but i was wrong. It has been written with such depth and eloquence i was amazed, so a job well done.

i swear im a psychic though. I was reading it and i thought to myself 'Sounds like to works of a Tool fan' I have no idea what the means but i checked your bio outta curiosity and i was right.

well i hope there is more of this to come because i enjoyed reading it.

p.s sorry, im retarded and i talk alotta **.