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| dizappearingirl 2005-10-20 ch 10,  | abusehm hM Tis a strange world where normal things are different and some are too much the same... ^_^ but tis most wonderful! ^_^ plz update soon |
| Carnicirthial 2005-09-19 ch 10, | abuseFantasitic! I can't wait for more. Please I beg that you keep the chapters coming fast! |
| dizappearingirl 2005-08-24 ch 9, | abusepoor Rhiannon...she cant seem to do anything right... i have to say Starck has not made a good impression on me at first, i just keep trying to keep and open mind about him though... he hasnt been very nice to say the least...^-^ yay for wonderful chap tho! ^__^ love how the story is going |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-15 ch 9, | abuseOh! Cliffhanger! I must find out what happens! |
| Carnicirthial 2005-08-12 ch 9, | abuseUh-oh! What's gunna happen? Will he die a horrible death? Now, is it just me or does Starck seem a little... Bipolar? Just a thought. Keep writing! |
| OieCuite 2005-08-05 ch 8, | abuseRan you amaze me again! This chapter was wonderful! Desperatly waiting for another chapter! :D |
| Monj 2005-08-04 ch 8, anon. | abuseNice chapter Ran. I'm sort of getting a feel for what Rhiannon is in relation to the place they're in. Very interesting concept you have going on, and I esp liked the conversation at the end. |
| Carnicirthial 2005-08-02 ch 8, | abuseOh, the Storeyteller! If the plot thinkens anymore our minds will be swimming in molasses! Keep writing! |
| dizappearingirl 2005-08-01 ch 8, | abuseo_o oh my...(did i say that last time too?) WOW and yay for an update. Tis interesting where this is headed. what will happen next? o it would be hard to realize you created a creature who isnt.. the best looking. ^_^ i just hope things work out! ^-^ update soon |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-31 ch 8, | abuseExcellent chapter. That part with coming into the light to better see his "ugliness" reminded me of Beauty and the Beast... lol. Anyway, can't wait for more! |
| dizappearingirl 2005-07-25 ch 7, | abuseo (shakes and shivers) WOW!! oh my goodness! what will happen next? WHAT!?!?!? o update soon so we can see! WE WANT MORE CUZ its WONDERFUL! O_O ^_^ |
| Monkey 2005-07-23 ch 7, anon. | abusewo...Oops I'll try to start the review with a word other then 'wow' This was amazing, the words just make this whole story come to life, it just leaps out and drags you into the world that you've created. I nearly screamed when I realized that there was no more, so I'm really really hoping that you post the next chapter soon. Thank you for writing this, it's beautiful. |
| Carnicirthial 2005-07-21 ch 7, | abuseO_o *twitch twitch* I hate spiders! I hates them prescious! Yes, we do! Well, teh plot picks up! I must compliment you on the incredibly human nature of Rhiannon, a quility I am only now beginning to weave into my own characters. Keep writing! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-21 ch 7, | abuseWow, nice detail at the end there. I wonder what will happen next? |
| Carnicirthial 2005-07-16 ch 6, | abuseMore, I demand more! please, I beg on bended knee! |