wow...that was really intense. Are you sure that's fiction? You almsot had me convinced that it was a first hand experience! It's one heck of a tale--a great coresponding story would be to tell it from her side. I think it would be awesome. I'm adding this to my favourites list, so if you decide to write another one like this, let me know, ok? I really liked this one...it's just...amazing. I'm gonna hardpressed to find another one-shot like this. Cya!