you're sure you edited it? mind if i redo it? I'm a beta...well, was for about 6 people for HP, but since i stopped that, i'm open for business again! Mind if I re-edit this for you? my email is on my bio, just let me know, ok?

It was awesome though! You wrote that in 6th grade? nice...was it for school or sth? hope you write more soon, I could definitely read more of this! lol. Kinda cliche, but it works. Now i guess i'm just curious as to what's going to happen when she gets older. And that necklace that Marcelina took off...im guessing that every elf has one and it contains their life? and then the one that she summoned or sth...that was her soul? Something along those lines. Just an educated guess...Cya!

Slightly choppy, but I like it! ^_^

~~Jamie