I know you don't understand why I love your poems so much but I do and they are really great...It's probably because it's a bit how I feel sometimes.

Love u!

Tona

i can relate to this, if i am correct about the interpretation. this is about someone getting reprimanded and that person cries in order to escape the reprimanding and/or gain sympathy and approval. yet, the person simply gets reprimanded and ignored afterwards. once again, i could be wrong about the interpretation so please correct me. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!

I love your rhyming! How you could write a meaningful poem and have it rhyme as well. Excellent job on that!

-NB

This is a really well done poem! It's original compared to a lot of the other poems you have. It really stands out. By the way, my penname used to be x.pretty.in.pink.x but now it's diamonds.on.the.inside. Just to let you know.- Amanda

Awe, defenitely a saddened mood. I liked it though, one of your best I think anyway!

wow i like the mysteriousness of the poem. it could mean several things. nice work.

so deep and sad...~Ami

I like the power of this poem and the slightly short lines. Well done.

I will review your "Truly Madly Deeply" story soon - I am very busy at the moment, but I will get around to it asap.

You're on my authoer alert.

hi; thank you for the review. it was much appreciated. i'll read the fic you indicated when i have the time to, which now i unfortunately don't. so for now, i'll review this, to remind myself to later.

i like the rhyming you have going here. the emotion you convey well with simple lines, and you have a fresh way of looking at this situation. really really well done. awesome job.

~k8

Awesome, great imagrey and simple. I really love the last two lines.

-Write on!

Wow that was powerful. Great job on this one. I hope you update your story soon also as I am dying to read more! :) Happy New Year! ~Abigail

Nice. Vague, but that's usually a good thing. It opens up more than just the meaning you intend for it...

Good job.