 jompe 2008-11-23 . chapter 1those little stories are so good! mind to write more? :D |
 kanari kireteru doll 2007-07-06 . chapter 1Oh wow. This is very deep, feathered lightly with a tabboo and erotica *shivers* Love it.
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 rainbowveins92 2007-06-12 . chapter 3I really like these stories.
Can't wait for more. |
 Collar de Espinas 2006-02-05 . chapter 3I really like these stories, though I have to admit that this last one lacked something...I don't know what.
The first one was beautifully written- your descriptions were wonderful and I adored their far from conventional relationship. The last line was just classic too!
I really enjoyed the second story and the melancholy tone it had throughout. I couldn't have been happier when Jamie and Stuart admitted their feelings for each other and I think you really managed to capture the sadness in the situation.
I guess that's why I was a tad disappointed with the third story... I found that your descriptions here didn't quite capture the essence of emotion that you managed so well with the first two stories. Regardless, it was a very good story and I loved Jordon and Dan as characters. I'd certainly enjoy reading more about these two and how things progress for them.
As a whole, I loved these stories and will definitely be looking out for updates! |
 Virginia Vividly 2005-08-24 . chapter 1I like the last line a lot. |
 rodeoclown 2005-08-08 . chapter 3I really like this last story...you do a good job of evoking atmosphere - hot and sweet at the same time. Selfish question: any chance you might write more on Jordan and Dan? |
 Virginia 2005-08-07 . chapter 3 Absolutely great. You've got a way with words, it captivated me, and I wwould have taken all of these boys home.
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Keep writing! |
 KillerLover 2005-06-23 . chapter 3Once again, not the ending that was expected, but that's okay, it was really good. |
 KillerLover 2005-06-23 . chapter 2Not a movie ending, I like it. |
 KillerLover 2005-06-23 . chapter 1Hi, I'd like to say that you are amazing. I've always played around with the idea of twins, and this chapter is something that just captures what some of the things that I've been thinking about, even if they aren't real twins. |
 Cookie Gestapo 2005-06-22 . chapter 2Awsome storie(s). |
 poupre a monte 2005-06-22 . chapter 2aww such butyful short stoires. |
 vampyre-lover0666 2005-06-20 . chapter 3lovely cant wait to read another |
 infidelity 2005-06-18 . chapter 1update, perhaps? these are really good. |
 Kri 2005-03-23 . chapter 2 It was nice, but I'm not going to lie, it was a bit sloppy...
Don't get me wrong, I loved both stories. The characters were pretty solid and the story lines were fun to follow. But you repeated a lot of words in the same sentence and it made for a slow and lagging effect.
And the descriptions in the different stories were all about the same >.<
But I really did like them, don't think I didn't. They're both very nice, and I love them... I just think you can do better. Someone with imagination like yours always can. |