Amazing. You really captured these moment here. You can feel it when you read it. It's so full of love, hate, lust and te feeling you get when you loose something dear to you. You can really feel the emotion in this

really liked this, one of the best peoms i have read in a long time,and i can really identify with every word, you said this extremely well, loved it. lots of love AllyCred

In a room were you were never allowed on top.. where you were

I dont get what happened exactly.. but the descriptions are wonderful and I like the repition and the ending is so sad