Favorite line: "maybe I should've kept my mouth shut." Can't we all relate to that? Man, I know I sure can. This is heartbreaking. Wow. Keep writing! :)

Hey...very nice poem, makes me think.

hugs, thats so sad...i can relate to some of it, but not allhugs

and thanks for reviewing Lil' Jo...it means a lot to can go pick_and_ learn a little more.

I love the concept and the title brings that tape player to mind, nice job again.

this was amazing I can relate in an odd fashion I liked loved and related to this you did an awesome job

aw...so emotional. I really like the theme here. It's SO contradicting...just thinking about all the pleasures turned to regret. Wonderful work. Thanks for the review! ;)

Nicely done, the truth is, We all wish to rewind to some moment, but, if we go back, we'll be thinking the same way, and we'll just do the same thing...it kinda sux, oh well, we're all in the same boat

I mean this in the best possible way, but you write really good depressed poems. Since I'm not depressed at the moment (knocks on wood) I dont know if it would make me feel better or not, but people can definatley see where you are coming from in all of these. If I could rewind time I would be so much happier, but hey, I like to think that things always work out for the better, eventually anyway.

i wish i could rewind stuff i do or say all the time. i can relate to this! awesome job.

it's beautiful! aw, one always wants to rewind things, sadly this can't be done, but you wrote a beautiful poem about it.. ) i like it so much.. :)

i like this. im sure there is smthg that all of us wish we could take bakc and rewind. good writing!

this is really good... it sounds like a love-hate thing, where you hate him and want him to love you at the same time. ah, confusing emotions. at least they make for killer poetry

If past was rewound,

Then, you wouldn't write poems,—

& I cryptic notes. —m—

;o; You make some of the best LOVE poems ever. Bittersweet and just emotional ! ::hugs::

Noelle

and not old you that you needed to think... you missed the "t" on told. This is one of the best of your recent poems, i really like it... its going onto my faves list. And when my heart is inevitably broken by the guy I love so much, (i'm not being a pessimist, just a realist- i'm 15, any relationship i'm in has to end in either a breakup or marriage, and we're too young for marriage so... that and living on opposite sides of the world... but i'll see how long i can drag it out for :P) anyway so when i'm all broken hearted over that i'll read over this and be in awe of how well you expressed the emotions. Hehehe... Awesome poem, i love it.